Rough Cut Feedback Collated Results

		Yes	No
Do you think that this production accurately manipulates time in a fragmented way to fit a conventional trailer?		11
Do you think that the dialogue combined with the text screens are effective in explaining the basic plot?		9	2
Do you think the flashbacks are clearly portrayed as a different time period?		10	1
Do you think that the editing of the production matches with the postmodern theme?		11
What could be added to make the plotline clearer or to add to the postmodern theme?	Voiceover.
	More shots of Nathan’s glowing eyes or reversed shots to show different time periods.
	More shots of Nathan doing stuff with his powers.
	More of Nathan’s mind-set – more on power of key.
	Some sort of explanation about the different locations – why each one is important in narrative.
	A change in screen colour for the different time periods/flashbacks.
	A voiceover maybe but everything is clear.
	Voiceover to explain what else is going to happen.
If no to any of the above, what could be changed or added to improve it?	Sound to match cuts and add drama.
	Voiceover.