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Date
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Actors
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Location
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Mise en scène
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July 31st
2017
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Joe, Sean
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Memorial Park
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Chest, Key
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August 30th
2017
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Nathan, Erin, Alex,
Liam
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Office
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Notepad, Key
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October 14th
2017
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-
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London
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London Scenery
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September 17th
2017
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-
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London
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London Scenery
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November 13th
2017
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-
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Beauchamps Field
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Park Scenery
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January 30th
2018
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-
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Home
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Chest, Key, File,
Jewellery
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Thursday, 8 February 2018
Shooting Schedule
Rough Cut Feedback Collated Results
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Yes
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No
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Do you think that this production accurately
manipulates time in a fragmented way to fit a conventional trailer?
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11
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Do you think that the dialogue combined with the text
screens are effective in explaining the basic plot?
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9
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2
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Do you think the flashbacks are clearly portrayed as a
different time period?
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10
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1
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Do you think that the editing of the production matches
with the postmodern theme?
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11
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What could be added to make the plotline clearer or to
add to the postmodern theme?
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Voiceover.
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More shots of Nathan’s glowing eyes or reversed shots
to show different time periods.
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More shots of Nathan doing stuff with his powers.
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More of Nathan’s mind-set – more on power of key.
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Some sort of explanation about the different locations
– why each one is important in narrative.
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A change in screen colour for the different time
periods/flashbacks.
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A voiceover maybe but everything is clear.
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Voiceover to explain what else is going to happen.
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If no to any of the above, what could be changed or
added to improve it?
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Sound to match cuts and add drama.
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Voiceover.
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